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I am Alone
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I am Alone |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I am alone! I have no one, As I turn to run. My friends are around me, But they can not see, They just let it be. My pain, Is all I have left. My soul, from me, has been reft. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I hate the feeling of being alone but soon someon will comfort you, great expression, hope to read more. jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
its 1:30am and i am alone. i know how it feels. keep up the good work! San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i know what it feels like to be alone. Its not a good feeling at all. Sometimes the closest people dont see whats standing right in front of them. It always good to talk to someone..... Do you mind If Show this poem to my friend i think it would make him feel better. Well keep writing. I loved the poem. ~Ina~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how you wrote this poem, it's simple but has a deep meaning. Great job. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Alone really sux...Way to portray that in a great work of art. Yeah, poetry is art...happy writing.. ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea well we all know how it feels to be all alone. In fact, like san....i am alone aswell. Just like i've been the whole day. BUt i know what you mean when you say alone, and it completely licks. Great poem  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Thanks for all of your support people, it means a lot. And Ina, go ahead and show it to your friend, I've got no qualms about others sharing my work with their friends. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Hey~ This is a really simple and heartfelt poem. I really like it. I've been there before too; thinking no one cares or understands your problems and fears. But I have learned, that there is always someone listening and wiping away every tear- Jesus! He loves you soo much! Keep up the great poetry! God Bless and Keep Smiling  Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3 |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Yes, actually, I've been finding great comfort in my faith as of late. That taking only second place to my conversations with Stef *is going to ask her out soon, really like her* Anyway, thanks "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is simple but so true, loneliness is one of the most depressing issues we can deal with, it may seem like an eternity but something will come to ease the pain. Nice poem Keoni |
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