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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
-=Troubles Resolved=- Forget me please. Live without memories; Without memories, hatred dies; When hatred dies peace arrives. but if peace conquers, dont we loose the purpose of it all? thought: life is but an ongoing strugle. dont give in, fight the war till the end. youll be happy you did. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
If peace arrives we lose all purpose eh? purpose to live, or purpose to hate? I mean, im not sure.......if we have peace in ones life and there is no struggle do we actually achieve this "happiness" from within. No fight + no struggle = happiness? hmmmmmmmm!!!!!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
happiness, dope, is but a state of mind. you can be happy all your life, but, there will always be those moments where somebody disagrees with you or one of those unfair moments you so well speak of. there always is a struggle, mabe even with yourself (if you live in a mountain and theres nobody in a 2000 mile radius). "No fight + no struggle = happiness" no happiness comes in all shapes and sizes, no "ONE" equation can give you happiness. the thing with purpose, i beleave that there is more to life than existing. theres also interaction, and almost nobody likes to be the same. interaction, diversity, strugle and peace in our diffrencess. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You're having some great thoughts, very deep. The way I saw the poem is that if we don't know hate, then the purpose of trying to reach happiness won't exist because all there will be is happiness. That's just my take on it though  Great, thought-provoking writing San. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
intriguing ideas and makes you think, great words and rhythm jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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