Teen Poetry #3 |
Reunion |
CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
Reunion its been 30 years of life love and pasts 30 years have passed since youve visited this place last 30 years of memories 30 years of love 30 years since you left this place and flew off like a dove now you come back to see all that changed to see both within and without all thats been rearranged 30 years have past yet still you remeber all the good times and bad of each and every september alot has changed in time that youve been gone your looking for whats stayed the same what has survived for so so long you came to see others and they to see you you get together to see who and how to chat about him and her and maybe that other guy too to brag about your life and to hear others brag too and to see if by some chance some other has done better that you yet its all in good nature its all just having fun just seeing if these new people have changed from that memory of someone you miss the old times yet yern for the new so you do this every 10 years to talk until you turn blue and when you gvo home you have updated your memories you have had a good time and made ammends with old enemies and you cant wait to do it again my parents jus went to a 30 yr highschool reunion, so i was bored and wrote this for them always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem i like the read and i hoped your parents liked it when you showed it to them. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I enjoyed reading this poem. Good writing! I have gone to a few reunions over the years and this painted a good picture of how most of them go. dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Looking ahead perhaps we all we be in their shoes someday. To be in this pointed reality doting on the opinions of others... Perhaps we all we will be there. See you in 30 yrs. TAP2 |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You did a really good job capturing the idea. You've got my vote. Keep it up. jason |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
just think though when it is our turn to go to the reunions...see people we thought we would never see again...it sounds like it would be fun...see people you were good friends with but then lost contact with...i honestly cant wait for my reunions to come up...you see how much people changed...besides its the memories of your life... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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