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Wrong Equation |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Wrong Equation: My life is crumbling away. My feet try to walk but I stay. I'm left alone and without a heart. I wish that my life would have never start. I breath but in breathing I die. I smile but in smiling I cry. Kill me, 3 times 2 isn't long. It's all an equation that went wrong.  OK so this is the last of the 5th cycle. The 6th round is on it's way if i decide to post up at all. Uhhhhh....you have all endured my past well enough and i have realized that most of you prefered my stuff that i wrote in 9th grade. Who knows, maybe you'll like my resent stuff more than that *6th round*...... so without further ado....tomarrow you will all see my first posting of the CURRENT round of writing. ADios! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
dope, this is the perfect prelude to the last cycle. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Excellent poem! I feel every single word that you wrote. Great job! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....i really loved this one, i;d say it was one of the best. "I breath but in breathing I die. I smile but in smiling I cry." those are wonderful lines.... salma |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is so well written! i loved it  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well Dopey, this is another great one. So do I understand this right...you're skipping the 6th round?? Anyway, great poem man. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well there's no round to skip too. I am currently workong on the 6th round. I so far have about 120 pieces of work. I'm just not sure which ones to post up and so on. It has a vast variety of poem topics and so on. I'll post some up tonight, but my old ones. From about 4 months ago. - glad you all liked this poem. thanks! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh...i see "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
when you say "My life is crumbling away. My feet try to walk but I stay" i feel compatible with your feelings, another great one! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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