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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA

0 posted 2000-10-12 03:39 PM


Everything will end up well in the end
And at the end of your rainbow
You'll find standing there your one true friend
Richer than any pot of gold
For they'll have arms strong enough to hold
And a love deeper than any sea
And ears that will never stop listening
Then and there you'll be constantly thanking God
For such a wonderful blessing
For you'll never be let down
Nor ever able to walk away with a frown
They'll always be around and the past will no longer seem to matter
So you'll never regret any more nights you spent alone
For the pain will all be erased
As you are filled with their love and grace
And as you drink in that smile upon their face
So everything will end up well in the end
For God will reward you with your one true friend..


"I'm not weird, I'm just misunderstood"

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
1 posted 2000-10-12 09:12 PM


"You'll find standing there your one true friend
Richer than any pot of gold
For they'll have arms strong enough to hold"
I liked the poem a lot, especially this part... you made me travel through the rainbow. Great poem,
Your friend,
                Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-10-12 10:02 PM


i liked your poem tons upon tons. I know you have tons of talent and id like for you to just blow it out there. great job!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-10-13 03:04 PM


This is a good poem, it really makes you think about friends and how special they are.  Thanks for sharing this with us

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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