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a sweet little poem.. u gotta read! =O) |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
heres a sweet little poem to replace the one that got deleted hope you injoy  *`~Destined~`* Im destined to love And yet be alone Im destined to run And yet still be found Alone in my room,im destined to hide But yet my love rows bigger inside I need somone special with a big heart To love me and help me right from the start Im destined to find him If it takes me awhile Cause i Know when i found him It would be worth the while Forever we'll love Together we'll be A kiss from the angel im destined to see LiL'Kay [This message has been edited by LiL'Kay (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is beautiful Lil'Kay! Very nicely penned, with lovely and positive sentiments of a love yet to be found. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a LOT! keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this is sweet...Its good to hear that you have a positive attitude after a poem got deleted...Keep up the good work!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
im glad you people liked it and best wishes to all! Later one and only LiL'Kay |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Thats a nice poem girl, I liked it a lot. Maybe you'll find someone soon. Maybe he's right here reading your poem right now. |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
There is a possibility there but who knows! |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
Be patient my child... The day of love will come to all... For God has pre-chosen the one for you, and the day will come...when the time is right... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really good. It actually put a smileon my face. Simple but very sweet. I'm glad you have that outlook in life. Awesome poem...keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww very cute poem hun! I hope you find that special guy very soon!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Huh...don't know why I missed this one before. These are very good thoughts, great job on it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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