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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i havent written in a while, but im starting at it again, about more important issues than before... now a little taste of times past... -=Ghost=- I'm the ghost of this lively town. I'm the one who's always down. Im the guy who is always host; at the annual fair always gets lost. I'm the one who follows you. I'm the one who loves you true. I go where you go. I do what you do. I'm the guy you see right through. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that your stay here is long and worth it... This was a very good first post...I hope that you do come back to share more with us... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, Welcome to Passions. great first post my friend. I admire your writing skills. Keep it up and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well great post San.....and just to let everybody know. San is in my school and one of my best friends. We both live in PR and are both seniors. He's a great writer and an odd ball. You'll like him and his writing. Keep it up san, good poem!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I like this poem, I'll be looking for more  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
thanks for all the replies. thanks for all the welcomes. dope, thanks for blowing my cover.(joking) right after i find my newest stuff ill post it up. thanks again (i apologize for lack of capital lettering and for lack of grammar) San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
hey Good first poem and welcome to passions! If you have any questions don't be afaid to e-mail me at halo1001@att.net! K? Great first poem and keep writing! I live in the present but yearn for the past... yet the future is so very near |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
maybe i should email you this but, questions about what? San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nice poem. Kinda fitting for the whole Halloween thing. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
never thought of that! San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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