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Easily said... and done?
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Easily said... and done? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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What the heck is up with this? You're crazy and strange, and wierd! Our friendship is odd, we're mad, we're not... What exactly is going on? Stubborn actions, cruel words. I hate that you could say those things so easily. I can't believe you'd so carelessly hurt me. I waited for an apology; I received nothing in return. In one of my up swings, I realized my faults. True, you stung me with an abrasive thrashing, but I also reacted poorly. So I swallow my pride, and attempt to fix things. Now you're okay with me again... We're normal once more, but for how long? This discussion went on for an agonizing time... But now that it's over, how it was so easily said, now done with. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I absolutly love the first stanza. It's so cool! It really sets up the rest of the poem. I think I'm liking it too much  Anyway, awesome job!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Jenn: Great poem! It expresses yourself very well! Keep writing ok? Lotsa Love, Angel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I agree with lake......the first stanza rocks. Good job! the rest is just kinda sad.....me no likes sad....but its ok anyway.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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