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Teen Poetry #3

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sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-10-09 06:33 PM

I CAME to the fight
and took my place upon the battle field
I SAW the odds against me
but not once did i yield
I CONQUERED my fears
and my enemy's fate was sealed

Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-10-09 08:06 PM

Wow, this is cool. I like how you used an old saying in your poem, it's creative. Awesome writing

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-10-09 09:08 PM

Excellent Sherm! What a clever and creative piece ... you certainly came, and posted, and conquered! I really enjoyed this ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

3 posted 2000-10-09 09:15 PM

Great work!! Very nice way of portraying this concept. Kudos to you!!

~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-10 02:53 PM

Great job, i liked this a lot.

the simplicity of the poem was met up with some deep meaning within it all. I liked this a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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