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kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
the night is bright with a starlit shy i sit and think as time passes by oh stary night with a moonlit sky take me away and tell me why give me a reason for why i trusted my friend i sit and think all night long about the things that all went wrong starlit sky give me a reason why i need some help please help me understand why i let her hold my hand somethings change and some stay the same but tell me why i feel this way i like this guy and i want hi to stay so tell me now and tell me fast cuz i am really really loosing my grasp on live, on earth, and in my brain i am about to go insaine |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, Welcome to Passions!!! I'm glad that you decided to join and share your poems in here Missy  And I hope that you stay a member of this family.What a wonderful first post. You definitely have your own style and format in writing, and this makes you unique. Great post and please keep writing and sharing. I love it "the night is bright with a starlit shy i sit and think as time passes by oh stary night with a moonlit sky take me away and tell me why" I love this line  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
WOW! I was very impressed with this one. The thoughts in which you wished to convey were strong and clear. I think that you have a very natural talent and hope it takes you far. Keep it up I do anticipate more!! < !signature--> Always ~*~Star~*~ p.s. Welcome To Passions!! *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to this here cess-pool of words and sentences. I hope you enjoy yourself because........well.....it's fun!!! The poem was good....great job and post more so we can all see how good of a writer you truly are!!!!!! HURA!!!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
thank you all YOU MEEN SO MUCH PEACE ] ME |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful piece. I've spent many night starting up at the stars, and searching for answers. I hope you find them, my friend. Keep up the great work! PS-check your e-mail! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Welcome to Passions my friend, you'll find a second family here, we are all friends and we help eachother as much as we can. Great poem, excellent first post, I loved the topic you use to write it. "i sit and think all night long about the things that all went wrong" Well, welcome and hope to see your work again soon. Bye, your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great entrance into passions and welcome!! I absolutely love it here and i'm shur you will too!! I love the topic you chose to write about and i think you have a lot of talent! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Very nice first post, I'm already impressed |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think the others are missing a lot if they don't read this. so to make sure they see it, i'm bumping this ~*BUMP*~I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i think the others are missing a lot if they don't read this. so to make sure they see it, i'm bumping this ~*BUMP*~I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey Acire... you bumped twice lol oops guess I bumped too *BUMP* It's been raining since you left me. |
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kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
what does bump mean? later peace me "when there was only 2 sets of footprints it was when i carried u my son" Footprints |
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Monica Ash Junior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 17 |
This was a good poem hope to see more!! Check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you think please!!!!! Monica |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good poem!! Welcome! Well, "bumping" a poem consists of bringing it back to the top with your reply, I guess that's what's gonna happen when I hit Submit reply.... Keep writing. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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