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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
what kind of pain could he be going through the thought of possibly dying what kind of things are running through his head does he let anyone know? the possible things he is thinking so much that runs through his head what about work? what about my family? where am i gonna get the money to pay for this? what a costly expense but it's worth saving the life of one that you love soon starts treatments he's like a painting now with tattooed black dots and a drawing like a field goal what will he turn into? he will be sick he will be weak he will be tired he won't be able to eat and his body will be worn and scarred is it true his hearing will be gone forever? we only wait await what will come await the future await more pain  "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Well, for the most part I guess you're right. But look at it this way, he's gonna be able to handle it. I know you aren't into all this kind of stuff, but people have told me that God never gives you more than you can handle. It'll be fine, really. Okay I don't want to sound too corney here so I'll stop. Great poem girl, keep writing SMILE, if not for you than for dad   Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Terrific piece of writing here. Take a look at my signature..... ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
wow, extremely great i mean it touches me in some ways other poems dont not all are this sad and great at the same time the 2 things never work but you somehow make it....i think when ppl write sad things theres a lot of anger in there to that just totaly pumbles the poem but you made it work good job "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You expressed your thoughts and questions well here Curlz ... it's so difficult to know how one might react to the struggles with health until it does happen. I've found that when I was going through many health problems myself, those I appreciated the most, were the friends and family who asked me about many of these things. They gave me a chance to talk and not feel as alone. Don't be afraid to open the lines of communication. I hope and trust things will go well. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is very moving. I'm sorry that you have to be going through this, but the only thing you can do now is be positive that he will make it through fine. Wonderful writing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I really dont have much to say but very touching piece. "we only wait await what will come await the future await more pain" Doesn't it seem like life is actually about this? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for replyin guys, it means A LOT to me!!! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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kutzly Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17ohio |
i love the poem you have a great style of writing remember your poems are you! peace me |
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