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shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

0 posted 2000-10-05 01:04 AM

To the pretty little darling
With blue diamonds in her eyes
That are deeper than the oceans
And more lovely than the skies.

I'll write this poem of passion
My words are sweet and true
And maybe I'll express to her
This Poets point of view

I see the pretty flowers
In the gardens of the world
But none are quite as beautiful
As this precious little girl

Her lips are soft like velvet
Her hair is silky lace
And her smile is like a thousand jewels
That adorn her gorgeous face

Her voice is that of angels
That sing sweet lovers' tune
The crickets are filled with envy
As they seranade the moon

I've never known the likes of her
I've never known her kind
But I've never sought for treasure
Though treasure i now find

Within her touch is magic
She chants her spell of flight
On my hardened heavy heavy heart
And it sails amongst the heights

Of all the pleasures in this world
Yes all the greatest things
I adore the sweetest little girl
That gave me back my wings

[This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-05-2000).]

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2000-10-05 09:10 AM

Whoever this girl may be she is very lucky to have someone admiring her the way you do. I think that you should give this to her...if anyone felt this way about me i'd want to know but its easier to say than to do. This was a beautiful poem and it really expressed how you feel about her.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-05 02:18 PM

well i disagree .......you should only give this to the girl if you want to and if you think the consequences won't be negative. I mean, think about it.....let's say some guy/girl you totally do not like for SOME reason gives you a poem about how much he/she admires you. You'd kinda be freaked out....... so i mean, just think about that.
Anyway the poem was good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

3 posted 2000-10-05 02:29 PM

I recited the poem to her last night. You see, we're really great friends, and I feel comfortable sharing my passions with her. Also, she enjoys being the object of my romantic focus. Thanks for replying guys.
-shady-

[This message has been edited by shadydaze (edited 10-05-2000).]

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-05 04:24 PM

This poem flowed very well and is stuck in my thoughts. It's got a real feeling behind it, I like that.

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-05-2000).]

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2000-10-07 02:16 PM

Quite beatiful if I do say so myself =) It's a good thing I had the chance to come on today to check out your poetry, I wish someone would write me a poem like that..though I write them constantly =) Keep up the wonderful work and I always look forward to reading more..

"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

6 posted 2000-10-07 02:35 PM

You must really admire this girl and i hope that this poem helps to take you guys farther because it is very obvious that you feel strong emotions towards her

Curlz

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2000-10-07 04:50 PM

This was so sweet...it flowed so well. Great job on sharing your feelings.

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2000-10-07 07:37 PM

This is one of those poems that i tell myself, "Am I glad I decided to read this poem" keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

kutzly
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 17
ohio

9 posted 2000-10-08 06:15 PM

this is really good! nice to read the poems that relate to me! but there arnt many that dont!
hope to see more
me

"when there was only 2 sets of footprints it was when i carried u my son" Footprints

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