Caught in the End (Very Weird)

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Teen Poetry #3

Caught in the End (Very Weird)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-07 01:41 PM

NOTE: ok i put VERY WEIRD in parenthesis cuz i have been told that the poem is weird. I think it's cool though hahaha. Ok here you go!

Caught in the End:

Sitting under the crumbled stars.
I'm thinking about the river swans.
Remembering back how I got too close,
They'd try to rip my fingers off.

Walking alone the street tearing up.
My cat Stuey used to walk here,
But one fateful day the UPS truck killed him,
And I cried so hard my eyes got red.

Sleeping while moving around in my bed.
I'm dreaming of the day I got slapped by Susan.
And I tried, oh I tried, to grab her breast,
But instead I tripped and fell on her leg.

Dying, smirking at the fact that I passed gas.
Knowing that everybody will frown as I die,
But now I cry as I realize
That I never got my jellybeans.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2000-10-07 02:41 PM

OK that was different! in the first few lines about your cat i thought it was going to be a sad poem but turned out it was just all weird and i'm glad you warned me beforehand because ummmm yeah it was pretty weird!

Curlz

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-10-07 04:05 PM

Yuppers...this was weird....but kickin'!! I loved it. YAY JAVI!

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-07 05:44 PM

I suppose it is weird, the jelly bean part just threw me into a state of mass confusion. Anyway, interesting

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