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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
Dave, I saw you in class I was shy you were shy You wouldn't talk to me I'd admire you I'd smile at you Trying to get your attention You finally talked to me But then you just said "yeah" I said he's a freak Then we gave each other screen names You IMED me and a smile apeared on my face Then one day someone told me; You liked me and I said really? Then I gave you my # you never called But I didn't believe anyone Then I called you and said "hey" We didn't talk I said "talk to you later" I noticed you liking me even more I liked you too and I thought you were cute I asked you out I was so happy It didn't work out But I was willing to try again On June 24th, 1999 I started dating you now we were serious I nearly jumped when you came online A year has passed I have enjoyed that year With a person who gave me time With a person who let me cry on them You mean the world to me Love Always Minna  You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What a beautiful story Minna!! I'm so happy it has worked so well. Best of luck to you both my dear! And about the e-mail, I just got it the other day for I had not checked it in a very long time...I started it, and it sits in my draft file, awaiting to be finished because Study Hall did not permit me the time I needed. Luv2LuvYa! Love Always ~*~Jess~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
Here's what's been happening.. I've been training for the SO(special olypics).. My arms hurt  , working on my page.. talk 2 u l8ter  ~*~CPAD~*~ You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey minna there is nothing really else i can say but this is so incredibly beautiful..i'm glad you feel so good.. HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, I'm so glad that things worked out for you in the end. It can be really hard in the begginning, both too shy to start the conversation... I'm glad one of you finally did. Shell. **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
This is my last week of training..Until Spring time, then it's again I'm going to the special olypics. Bye Luv ya, Minna You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem was written very simply. Written how a person would just talk. I liked it a lot. I think the style was great to go along with this. Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is such a nice poem, it flowed great and is a good story. I like it |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awwww... this was so cute. great job. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is soo sweet!! I'm so glad this has worked out for you!! Good luck, keep it up Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Minna~~~Its good that you got someone like him in your life to help you...I have my boyfriend too...But he is leaving me for about 2 weeks to go on vacation...I wish you the best of luck with him in the future... P.S.~~Good luck at the Special Olympics!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
well it's all done until the spring my arms hurt but it was worth it. Now peace out Min You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
love it.... If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad that everything worked out for you. Seldom do you see poems in passions that have a "and they lived happily ever after" type of ending. You described the situations really well..keep writingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
If you guys wanna email me anytime go ahead. I'll be glad to recive emails from all you guys.. [email protected] You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Minna: I'm really glad everything worked out for you. I have a crush like that! And I wished that things would happen...anyways, beautiful poem with beautiful meaning! Keep writing! Lotsa Love, Angel |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
Fearless_Angel Welcome to passions! This is how people say my name...Meena.. Bye |
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