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Tonite will be the nite....
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Tonite will be the nite.... |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Tonite will be the nite I pick you up from your house, Your looking as beautiful as can be, Nothing will ever come between you and me, Tonite will be the nite we dine in the beautiful resturant before the dance, The nite will always be young cuz I will be holding the one I love. When I arrive at your house I look in your eyes, I fall in love all over again with that beautiful smile, Theres something about you that makes me tingle, Everytime you smile I get the chills, This makes me think I dont ever wanna leave you, And I never ever wanna loose you, Tonite will be the nite we realize that its true and meant to be just you and me. "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job, i thought the poem was really sweet and extremely true. Great job in portraying what it feels like to be in complete awe to a woman who you feel greaty for.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
OMG this poem is soooo sweet! It's almost never that i get to read this from a guy and it's so extremely sweet. Great Job!  "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is incredibly sweet! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Dopey,curly,alwye,thanks for replying and yeah i try to write and be as sweet as possible i am not a mocho guy or ne thing im not also a nerd ya know i just feel that girls need to be treated great cus there the most important things on this earth Branden "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww that is an incredibly sweet poem. That sounds like the most perfect night! Very beautiful poem! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Just to repeat everyone else, this is sweet You expressed yourself well here branden. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
As everyone has already said, this is a really sweet poem. I'm glad to see other people in passions as actually being satisfied with their life right now. As noticed, a lot of the poems are about hirting. I'm glad to read one about satisfaction and praise Keep writingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
THANK YOU ALL! I HAD THE MOST WONDERFUL NIGHT LASTNIGHT NOTHING CAN BE COMPARED TO IT EVER EVER IN MY WHOLE LIFE MY WEDDING DAY WONT EVEN COME NEAR AS GREAT IS THIS AND IM PRETTY SURE OF THAT....LOOK FOR A NEW POEM THAT DESCRIBES HOW MY NIGHT WAS..THANK YOU ALL LOVE ALWAYS BRANDEN "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You're obviously very in touch with your feelings, and you express them very frankly. I like that, it's honest..... good work. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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