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Innocence |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I lost my innocence, Which i've cherished since i was a little girl. The kind of innocence, That made this seem like the perfect world. My friends will always be there for me, Or thats what i was led to believe. Everything i looked forward too, Was as magical as it seemed. My biggest problem was missing a school trip, When the night before i came down with the flu. Now my biggest problem, Is having to deal with all of you. My innocence abandoned me, It left me unprepared. I dont know how to be an adult, This is making me so scared. These are people i've grown up with, Who i use to think could never make mistakes. Now your all so different, These pressure's i can not take. Where did my innocence go? I need it back right now. I'm not ready to be an adult, I havent yet learned how. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really, really good. I loved it. Keep it up. Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
is this about what i think it is? my innocence was stolen by my ex...i still shiver whenim near him If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a good poem, I really could see a strong feeling like you're seaching for something you need. Great writing. |
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