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Tie me up with a red ribbon
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Tie me up with a red ribbon |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Tie me up with a red ribbon, Let me feel your love, But is it true, Are you sent from the one above? Take me somewhere special, A quiet place that only you know, Let us sit together staring into each other eyes enjoying the show, See me my beatiful lady, Please be mine, Because the love I can give is better than a valtine, So Tie me up with a red ribbon, let me be free to love again, I want it that we are never apart, So lovely lady come to me, For our love will set us free.  early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I liked your poem Jay, very sweet...so who is the mysterious lady?  J/K...Again I liked your work! See you soon!  "Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Unknown |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
This was a really sweet poem Jay. Great work! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thank for the reply chic and ScG well to tell the truth no myterious lady just stuff bottle up inside me early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, but socially dead. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey!! This was really good, put it with music and it would make an awesome song. Keep up the great work** ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so good, I love it!  Great work. |
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