The Neverending Cycle of girl meeting guy or vice versa

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Teen Poetry #3

The Neverending Cycle of girl meeting guy or vice versa

Wisdom
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since 2000-06-25

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-06-25 09:37 PM

Guy meets Girl,
Girl Meets Guy,
Hand in hand one minute,
At each others throats at a blink of an eye.
now dearly parted they both now see,
"That one with the other complete's me."
SO
Guy makes up with girl,
Girl makes up with Guy,
Hand in Hand together again
Hopefully forever this time.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2000-06-25 09:51 PM

Wisdorn: Welcome to passions.

This is a good poem highlighting the main points of relationships.

Nice work.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-06-26 12:42 PM

yes great work and welcome to passions. well i rather enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you so keep posting.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-06-26 01:26 AM

i liked this poem...but i could swear that i read something almost exactly like this in a book somewhere...unless you just re-worded it...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-18 03:29 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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