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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-05 07:18 PM

I'm really scared of falling,
Falling to the ground.
Each day i feel my breath get shorter,
Life is making me drown.
Im really scared of giving up,
Just losing all of my faith.
Sometimes i think i might not wake up,
To see tomorrow's day break.
Things are all too difficult,
Everything makes me meloncholy in some way.
Tell me you wont let me go,
Tell me i need to stay.
I'm so scared that when the time comes,
When i begin to losen my grip on life itself,
That i'll let myself slip.
I'm afraid i wont have a reason,
To try to stay strong.
All i hear in my heart and my head,
Is that horrible depressing song.
Please give me a reason,
To fight through today.
Please give me a reason,
A reason to stay.

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

1 posted 2000-10-05 07:32 PM

that almost made me cry, it made me think of my best friend in the whole wide world, who has been going through a depression lately. I mean its not horribly bad, she at least acts like she's happy when other people are around, but when the two of us are alone she starts telling me about who no one cares, and that they would all be happier if she was gone. Sorry for rambling, but it was a great poem. Keep writing!!

Luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-05 07:49 PM

This was so emotional, I like it, great writing.

"I'm really scared of falling,
Falling to the ground."

Fearless_Angel
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

3 posted 2000-10-05 08:59 PM

Hey xShUgArHiGhx:
    I'm really sorry you feel this way. I'm going through pretty much the same thing...depression! I really like your poem. It said everything that I have trapped inside. I'd love to get to know you better and maybe we can help each other through hard times...but if you ever wanna talk, drop me a line at [email protected] or gimme an "uh-oh" at 64399384 on ICQ. Well, me got ta go now...TTYL! Peace!
                   Lotsa Love,     ~***~
                              Angel (^_~)

Fearless_Angel
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

4 posted 2000-10-05 09:14 PM

Hey:
I'm back. Sorry! I just forgot to add this to my library! Good work! Thanks...
Angel (^_^)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-10-06 01:51 PM

I agree with everybody on this being very emotional. Great work and keep it up!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2000-10-06 03:16 PM

Aww babe my heart goes out to you. this was so good and im sorry you have to find the strength to wake up each morning and continue on with your life. keep a smile on that face and in your heart and everything will work out

~!*DQ*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

7 posted 2000-10-07 09:30 PM

This poem is very hard for me, it made me remember my past, a past I want to forget. It was like a mirror of my past and I'm so sad that you're going through this feelings. The most important thing is don't lose your mind, don't do anything stupid. I felt like you a long time ago, and I tried to do something that I still regret.
So, that's my advice, now keep on living and know that the best things are coming. If you ever need to talk about it, my ICQ# and email are avaiable.
Bye, your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

8 posted 2000-10-07 10:33 PM

wow this is so good... but so sad!! i cried... this is such a tough situation

i hope it isnt; going on with you or your friends

well good work

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

9 posted 2000-10-07 10:49 PM

"Sometimes i think i might not wake up,
To see tomorrow's day break."

This is so very sad...I can definitely relate to your words here. Keep up the wonderful work.

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

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