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Dream(plz just look at this short piece) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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A kiss is just a kiss untill you find the one you love, A hug is just a hug untill you find the one your thinking of, A dream is just a dream until YOU make it come true. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this, it's inspirational  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That's good, short n sweet  Bel |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Great work, sweet and simple, I like it. Nice job, keep writing!! Luv, SweetStuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Great poem, great poem. I'll print this and put it where everyone can see it. Really good thoughts. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Branden: I really like this poem. It's short but has great meaning to it. Keep up the great work okies? Lotsa Love, Angel (^_~) [This message has been edited by Fearless_Angel (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This one's sweet. Nice job. It's a happy one! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I liked this one...Very different and creative...Keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is so cute! i love it!! |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
great poem and i hope to read more. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Thos three lines do mean a lot. What a way to express thought. Very impressive. keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's good...and very true. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
short and sweet. I like this. whoever you wrote this about must be very special to you. I wish I had someone who wrote poems to me. Oh well, bye. Love ya, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow i didnt think this would get so many replys thank you all so very much and this poem does mean a lot in a couple different ways...Thank you all...again lol peace Branden "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Monica Ash Junior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 17 |
Wow this was a really really good poem it is all true!!!!! Check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you think please!!!! Monica |
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