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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-05 12:53 PM

I'm sorry my friend,
Did i make you cry?
It's not my fault that deep inside,
I truely want to die.
Do you want me to pretend?
And put on a happy face?
I'll say i'm ok,
But my feelings just cant be erased.
I know this might scare you,
It scared me at first too.
Things will be ok,
Just like i've been telling you.
You dont like to see me sad,
And im sorry it has to be this way.
I just cant go on,
Pretending to be something that i'm not,
another day.
Are you ok?
Tears are falling down your face.
Why should it matter that i'm like this?
Someone could always take my place.
I dont think you really need me,
Your all so selfish and you prove it more everyday.
You cant take how i'm feeling,
You say it's just not fair.
Why should i believe you now?
You never really cared..

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-05 02:21 PM

Well this poem was full of heart. I liked it but i just hope you find some friends to lean on. Adios!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

2 posted 2000-10-05 02:32 PM

I liked this poem. like dopey, I hope you find a friend to lean on. but you can always share your feelings here at passions, and we'll never turn you away. keep writing.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-05 04:36 PM

This is so full of emotion and well written. Another great poem you've written. Are you going through this right now?

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-10-05 05:34 PM

Wow! How I can relate. This was written very well, you have talent. If this is about you, I'm sorry you're going through something like this. Keep smiling
Bel

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2000-10-05 07:10 PM

Thanks everyone...yea this is about me. I know i've submitted a lot of sad and depressing poetry but overall that feels like the only natural thing to write about right now. So i'm sorry if the words are a little over depressing but i love expressing myself this way cause it makes me feel a little better =o)

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