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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
swing (bpm=90) Casual words exchanged blossom into love mind searches body body searches soul which lets out its cry of contentment contentment fades to joy joy to happiness then to only a slight smile taken for granted till... it's gone the cycle completes itself and the saga continues. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm glad to see you posting again, it seems like it's been a while since I've seen one of your great poems. I like the use of feeling in this, it's well written. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanx, I'm glad you liked it. I believe that in poetry feeling is more important than form. I was I a writer's block for about three weeks. now at last I'm stating to write again. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this really kicked some major booty. I liked this poems a lot and even though you were in a writers block, you came out of it strong. GOOD!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Its good to see you back Jose!!!Good work too...Writers block sucks...I think you should go get some medicine...I mean a 3 week writers block...LOL Cant wait to see more!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I'm glad you two like it. writer's block was hard, but it's great to be back. I think the block is gone for good cause this one just flowed out naturally. |
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