Answers - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-10-02 07:39 PM

What do I have to say,
to make you understand?
Answers won't come easily.
Things won't work as planned.

Listen closely to your heart,
things will fall in to place.
But make your decison quickly,
you need to keep the pace.

You know exactly
what you need to do.
You shouldn't need
to think it through.

Don't pay any attention
to your brain.
Because if you do
it will bring so much more pain.

Look into your heart
and you will surely see.
It is possible for
answers to come easily.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-02 08:09 PM

Well i liked this poem a lot. I read it to my nephew as this little story and he was smiling. He liked it too!! Great job!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-10-02 08:59 PM

Hey this was super. Great work. Keep it up!!!!

~carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2000-10-02 09:56 PM

You never stop making me cry do ya? lol no this one did bring tears to my eyes cause me myself have made a couple mistakes like that and i regret them severly now and i never did get the one person i loved cause i thought with my head and not my heart great work keep it up hun

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-10-02 11:51 PM

Pixie~
Good work!!!

Look into your heart
and you will surely see.
It is possible for
answers to come easily.

I think that when you look in your heart you find the answers that you are looking for...I know that when I looked into my heart I found what I wanted when my head was telling me no...Thanks for sharing this with us!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

5 posted 2000-10-03 08:25 AM

HAHA! thats great about reading this to you nephew LOL he is going to write when he gets older i bet! appreciation of poetry at a young age!

well thanks for your rply too branden! i cna;t eleive it brought tears to your eyes! talk to you soon!! bye y'all!
~*Pixie*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-10-04 02:20 PM

"What do I have to say,
to make you understand?
Answers won't come easily.
Things won't work as planned."

This is a question a lot of people ahve to ask. I think you did a good job of explaining yourself with this poem, I like it

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.