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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2000-10-01 08:00 PM

Where is he, my knight in shining armor
To help save me from the impending danger of a broken heart
I long to have him by my side
To help slay the dragons that lie dormat deep within my soul
Let him come, let him hurry
Before they stir and awake in a fiery fury
With just one tear, they'll awaken
Then my soul would surely be forsaken
You must understand that I am under a curse
Only to be broken by the one who appears in my dreams
The purest of hearts and the bravest of men
Or soon my life will be damned
And I'll no longer be able to stand upon my own two feet
For by then my heart would have given up to defeat...

"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-10-01 08:36 PM

Out of all the people here that post...I think that you are the most creative...I really believe that...I mean it was the title that caught my eye...I liked it though...Very different...Unique...Thanks for sharing this with us!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2000-10-01 08:42 PM

he he he...given the title I thought this was going to be a humorous approach...but no...
None the less (I never really understand what that meant, but I'll use it anyway)...None the less it is a fantastic poem, your work never fails to be brilliant!!

**life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze**

**I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away**
~Robbie Williams~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-01 11:09 PM

Oh, now this is cool! Very creative as Erin said, I like it a lot

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

4 posted 2000-10-02 01:50 PM

Here I am to rescue you.
I'm your hearts own dreams made true.
My pen is the magnifiscent sword I weild,
and love is my inpenetrable shield.
With magic I'll cast away your fears
and silence the dragons within your tears.
Passionately fighting, protecting your soul
from the hideous beasts that would take control
With truth and justice, I'll conquer them all,
as you you watch from my arms how the dragons fall

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-10-02 07:54 PM

Oooooo a knight in shining armor replies to you.....OOOOOoooooooooOOOOOOOooooooooo
*hears love in the wind*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

6 posted 2000-10-03 01:19 AM

Truley wonderful as always....I would expect nothing less of such a mind. Who be'eth thy valiant knight forseen upon thow's nocturnal lives?

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-10-03 07:18 AM

Excellent writing Ceinwyn! A most beautiful fantasy ... nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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