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Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 04:08 PM

I wrote this for my friend Phil when he had to choose between my best friend and some girl, Karen, who is NOTHING compared to what my friend was to him. He never even liked Karen until he found out that she practically raped some guy at a party. This was my plea to Phil to make the right choice. But he chose Karen...

How could you do this?
She means so much to you.
But you were not honest,
Now her heart bleeds blood blue.

Tell her what you’re thinking;
Fix your mistake.
You hid things within,
and her heart you did take.

You have two choices, now:
You may keep it, for one.
Or polish it up, give it back,
Hang your head and say you’re done.

Make the right choice,
For if not, you’ll have regrets,
An emptiness in your heart,
And a pain deep in your chest.

This will be your last chance,
To make this great girl yours.
So please don’t break her heart,
And then walk out that door.

You’ve told me the story--
How you think you like Karen.
But without my friend, you see,
Your world would be dark and barren.

You are blinded by lust.
You cannot see the truth.
So search within your heart and soul,
Because the answer lies only in you.

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-01 04:14 PM

That situation is horrible!! I know that must make you sooooooooooo mad, and I have practically NO advice for this situation, because if it happened to one of my friends, I'd slap the guy..or kick him or something..but anyway you get the idea. Well, you're poem is great though..grrrr...good luck

hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

HerMelness
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada

2 posted 2000-10-01 04:24 PM

Nice poem.. I'm sorry it was intended for someone who isn't capable of seeing what I can see just from reading it. Your friend must be amazing if she has someone like you willing to do this for her. I hope she knows how lucky she is!

-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-10-01 05:02 PM

Well in my opinion the guy isnt worth it if he is gonna choose that girl over your friend...But what do you mean by when you say "raped"???Did she like throw herself all over the guy or something???

Well anyways you seem like you are a good friend to this girl...

Keep up the good work!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-01 05:41 PM

He didn't choose her after reading this (you did show it to him, right?)??? I like this poem, you did a good job on it!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2000-10-01 05:48 PM

Wow. Sometimes men can be soooo moronic ehh?
I do happen to know of a sweetheart or two... but usually, something like this happens. I'm sorry he chose the wrong one.... but the way I see it, everything happens for a reason. Unfortunatly, he may have to learn his lesson the tough way. Good poem.
Jenn

"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2000-10-01 06:14 PM

Hey thanx for your replies everyone!
Erin when I said "raped" I meant LITERALLY! The guy was passed out and she just, well, had her way with the guy! One of his friends slept in the guy's car with him that nite to protect him from the girl! And Lakewalker, yes I showed him the poem. That nite he told her his decision was this other chick. What a dumb dumb boy well, thanx everyone! Mucho Amore!

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2000-10-01 06:17 PM

Sara hunnie! i love your poem and since it was for me i commend you highly on it.. Phil is obviously dumb.. and to reply to someones question she seriously RAPED thay guy... thank you so much girl i oove you hahaha
~*Justine*~

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