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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
You don't see my pain your eyes are blind from your ignorance all the love you use to show me is all gone now nothing but a dream now that will never exist again you use to be there for me everytime I cried you use to be the one who was always by my side you use to call me your best friend everything about you has changed you act different around me now and hang out with different people too two new best friends in your life now two who have replaced me and taken my spot in your life now I only feel like a burden to you and that you don't want me around and you wonder why I'm with new friends I'm not going to stick around forever I will want to be with people who actually care for me So it is up to you do you really want to have my friendship forever do you really want to keep your best friend who's known you the longest and has treated you the best out of everyone else If you want my friendship treat it right because it's not just another game it's real life My emotions arn't meant to be played with there meant to be cared for the same way you use to care for me Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sometimes that little saying BFF is never what it seems. Friends come and go... just like a boy/girlfriend will. This usually hurts more to lose a friend. Good poem... good luck in your sitch if it's about you! Jenn< !signature--> "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
the cruel politics of high school often do the segregating that we never want to happen. and most of the time, people are to scared to step outside of their boundaries, and against the flow of their clique, just to meet someone new or make a friendship work. i think, if this is at all autobiographical, you should let your friend read this. leave it in his/her locker or on their car. great work here. well penned thoughts. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree, you should give this to them. It's a great poem about a tough subject. I think you've written about it well  |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow you are very talented! i really enjoyed reading this poem because you made it interesting which is hard to do for this kind of subject. keep writing i'd love to read more Curlz "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys, I'm really glad you all liked this poem. It is to do with a friend of mine, it's just that I'm afraid that if I give this poem to her she will get mad at me. But the last time I let her know how I was feeling, which was the same kinda subject, she cried. So I don't know what I will do yet, but I will think about how I'm going to approach her about it. Thanks guys for your replies and concerns. smiles poe  Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! luvd it!!! hehe, all I can say!! luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Wow I can really see that you liked my poem lol. Well all I can say is thank you. smiles poe Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
If you want my friendship treat it right because it's not just another game it's real life WOW!!!Do I know what you are going through...I am going through this right now...And it sucks...Cuz when I need a friend that I could confide in...Its like who am I gonna call...You know what I mean...Ohh well they say boyfriends/girlfriends come and go and friends last forever...There is no such thing as forever...But anyways if yous were meant to be something will brings yous back together...Thank you for sharing this... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks for your replies, in a way it is good that we can relate to this because we understand each other but in another it sucks because of the circumstances. But life never treats anyone good so what can ya do? Thanks for replying.smiles poe Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
¥®¶¤§PÖe§¤¶®¥ Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think that this problem is quite cliché these days. Obviously I am not putting yours down and categorizing it into this sub-group of problems in accordance to our teenage fantasias. I hope you find some sort of positive aid within your problem and prevail.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Do I know how you feel or what?!?! The only difference is that I am losing my best friend to her boyfriend that lives with her...ouch! He shouldn't even be living with her! She's only 16, and yet her mom allows it. Oh wellers, she'll be back when he breaks her heart (again). Best of luck to you and your friend! I hopw it all works out. Love Always ~*~Star~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys for your replies and your support, I really appreciate it. Thanks, smiles ¤poe¤Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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