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On an Angels' Wings[not the best tital] |
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~*Meghan*~ Junior Member
since 2000-05-22
Posts 17 |
I have been telling my dreams to the door I thought that maybe it would open up to me I have confided in my love because it's been so good to me I have trusted in my patience because it waits it's turn in life ~*~ I have learned my life through my lessons because my teacher is the best there ever will be I have grown up where the green grass grows because I can run free and play I have mastered the art of freedom because so much is given to me ~*~ Can you really tell your dreams to the door? Will it ever open up? Can you really confide in love? Is it really perfect? Can you trust in patience? Isn't that the key for life? Can you really learn life from lessons? Is their a perfect teacher? Can you really grow where the green grass grows? I suppose if it's not to high. Can you really mast the art of freedom? I suppose if enough is there. ~*~ If love is the friend of all people, and patience is the key in life. Will you be there like an angel, and hold me throughout my strife. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
I am pretty much speachless on this one..i really loved it.....it's just written so well... I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
this was a great peom!! Loved it.. Hope you hear more! Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
hey nicely done, i liked it, keep writing. Luv, sweetstuff ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this is great writing, it made me think. I really like this, nice work  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with Lakewalker. The questions you asked in your poem actually really made me think really hard. Very nicely written Meghan. You are very talented. keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Oh I like it...I like it A LOT!!!! And the title wasn't bad...it came clear towards the end... Oh wow this poem is so great, I can't get over how it took shape. I thought in the first two stanza's that you had this life things pretty sussed out...and then all those questions that came spinning out...it really was wonderful. **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
The wheels in my head are slowly turning after reading some of this...I believe that there is a perfect teacher out there...I know I had a teacher that to me was perfect...She helped me out more then I think she will ever know...She was more then a teacher, but a friend...You did a really great job with this one...2 thumbs up to you!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow this is great!! I'm speechless, still. Well, keep it up okay? Hasta luego Bel |
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