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Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-29 02:21 PM

-A Sure Thing-
Was it a sure thing?
I thought it was this time.
How wrong I was though...
It is a fatal crime.

Will I be able to
trust you again?
Or am I sentenced for
tears to fall like rain?

When will I know the answer?
Not soon enough.
But I will until then,
I will stand up and be tough.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-09-29 02:45 PM

I liked this one, especially these two lines:

Or am I sentenced for
tears to fall like rain?

Great job

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-09-29 03:01 PM

Hey I liked this. Keep it up!!

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-09-29 04:38 PM

Good job, you be tough pixie, you stay cool too. you have a lot of talent.....and this is coming from a guy who refuses to tell people that unless its true.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-09-29 05:17 PM

This is a really cool poem. It just clicked w/ me. I've never read any of your stuff before, but now I'm looking forward to more. Peace out, chick.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-09-30 12:04 PM

Way to go girl!!!! You pick that heart up! anyways, was a wonderful poem, really it was. So sorry of the pain beared. Keep your head up...look in your heart to find the answers to life's greatest questions.
Love Always
~*~Star~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

6 posted 2000-09-30 02:13 AM

great poem, keep writing!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2000-10-30 07:23 PM

short but straight to the point. I'm proud of you!!! That's the way to do it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-10-30 08:57 PM

This was great and a nice positive attitude to stay strong. Keep it up!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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