»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
Bleeding innocence
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
Bleeding innocence |
|
|
Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Bleeding innocence Blood flows over darkened paths Wiping tears through shouting laughs Flickering blades over naked skin The bleeding innocence comes from within Heatened shivers can't take freezing heights Burning mountains unleash losing fights Hatred feelings can't feel loving sin The bleeding innocence comes from within Better feel alone than feel lost together Loving words compare hating signs forever Only hate get's out and hate get's in But the bleeding innocence comes from within. *tralalalalaaa.....* *luvz, VS* All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Virgin Suïcide - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hellllllooooooohhhhhoooooooow...... All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Relax Killer!!!Good one!!!But where in the world did you get the idea for this one??? It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
||
|
Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
I really really really don't know....but I like it.... thanx for the reply!!!!!!!  luvz, VS All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
||
|
Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Good work! I enjoyed this poem Virgin and I hope to read future work. |
||
|
Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
This poem is so twisted(in a GOOD way OF COURSE!)-cool  i LOVE IT! it is so original as is all of your work! i love it keep it up!!! ~*Pixie*~ |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job on this one, thanks for sharing it with us! |
||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great poem, did you realize the abundance of smiley faces in the replies to this poem? BAD BAD!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
||
|
LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Oh I am definately down with this. This is straight up awesome. And I also noticed the smiley faces. Later!  *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
||
|
StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I loved it!! That was great, where did you pull it from? The idea was excellent and so original. Keep iy up my dear. And I promise I will write you back soon, I've been one busy little girl.  Luv2LuvYa! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
||
|
anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
the words you used made me tingle all over...this was really really really great!..i truly loved it so keep it up...that's all i can say I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
||
|
Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
      hehe, even more smilies!!!! Thanks all of U for UR replies!!! Angelwings: hehe, I'm sure I'll keep on writing!! Pixie: it was supposed to be twisted!!! yeha, glad U liked it!!! Lakewalker: hehe, UR welcome!! Dopey: I noticed!! but there're even more!!! thanx!!!! Meredith: Thank you!!!! Jessica: I dunno where it came from...just...BOOM!!!! Glad you liked it!! and it's ok...I'll still be waitin'!!!! Luvz2ya2!!! anomaly: eya!!! thanks!!!! LUVZ!!! to all of you!!!! VS hmz....a lot of !!!!!!!! too...... < !signature--> All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-30-2000).] |
||
|
curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
this was an excellent poem, not exactly the happiest poem but still very good. p.s. i love again by lenny kravitz it took me forever to find someone to download it from! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
||
|
Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eeeey!! thank you!!! hehe, I just luv that song!!!!!! btw your name is just sooo cute!!!*curlygurly* hehe, luv it!!! luvz, VS All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very strong sentiments there. Very good write, i am really impressed. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
|
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this is by far one of your best poems. I loved this a lot. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey...this poem was sooo true. I thought it was great!! Good job and keep on writing =o) |
||
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
VS, WHOA!!!!! There's no other word to describe this poem. I love it. You almost made me cry, I guess this relates to me somehow. Love ya, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
||
|
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Vs, I forgot to add this to my library, so anyways, I love this. Love ya, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
||
|
Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
whoa!! this was out there.. i luved it!! very good work.. keep it up Slim "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
||
|
DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey VS! Please dont leave us..i love your work. it has so much passion, id really hate to see you leave. but if u found another place let me know what is it so i can go read your work there if u decide to leave! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
