Teen Poetry #3 |
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Romance (will the trend continue?) |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico ![]() |
OK so yes, the trend.....if you don't know what i mean by that then look at my other poem posted up yesterday. ANYWAYZZZZZZZZ!!!! Here's this poem: Romance: You're a pretty little girl, But you don't know the couple dance. I'm really into you, And I want to start a romance. Would you like to know my name? Maybe my favorite color too? I'd like to be your lovely man. That's something I'd like to do. The rain falls down the mountain. The sun refused to shine. I look into your heart, And I want to call it mine. So please pretty girl Give us a chance. I think we'll make it through, And start a romance. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awwww Dopey's in love!!!LOL Good poem buddy!!!What poem are you talking about though that you posted yesterday??? It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem i am talking about it titled "The Limit of the Unlimited". ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Aww Dopey that's sweet! You've got a lot of talent...keep it up muchacho okay? Hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Javier ... this was lovely! Such tender and beautiful sentiments, with wonderful affection and hope shining through of a new romance on the horizon. Much enjoyed this I did! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really dont want to say this to one of your poems, but it's cute ![]() |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahahahahahahaha it's cute? I found that to be sooooooooooo funny. As if cute was bad in a sense lakewalker. Well yea, i guess the poem is cute. Hahahahahahahaha awwwwwww ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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