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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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How can I hate you? When I am by far the worst of us all! I couldn't let you go... I had a need to be with you, but I should have known better. I accuse you of such horrible acts, that I myself have done, but much worse. Who said you had to be here for me? I made all of that up in my head. I put you up on a pedestal so high... I thought you needed me, too! I'm sorry for being the one to cling... And I, far more obsessive than you all, am sorry for what I have put you through. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
you sure are writing a lot of good poems lately! i don't know how you come up with so many so fast but whatever you're doing keep doing it because it's workin for ya! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you! I just happen to be in a sitch. that helps me write right now! Sometimes I'm so blocked it's unbelievable. So, when I feel inspired, I just write... before I lose it. Jenn< !signature--> "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~Is this based on real life???Sounds like you apologized already...And whoever you wrote this for should read it... And I know what you mean when you talk about the block!!!I hate that so much... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great poem here! I like this one a lot. I just like when people admit they have some problems  ha, anyway, great job! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
admitting that we have our faults too is a very big step, and I did the same thing. Actually, like you, I blamed myself for everything that happened. But you know what, I did everything to make her happy. Now, I think that it's totally unfair to me that I even put the blame on myself. Crying, hurting, all those things that come with it, is normal. Even for you to want him more and more eventhough you know he's gone. But don't put everything on your shoulders because I know you did things to for him too, unselfish things. Great write Jenn....keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everyone for your comments! I don't know if this is entirely factual... In essence yea it is. But really it's kinda exxagerated. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem gave me the shivers. I mean, i guess you're going through some times. Hope you get through them. Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Some times?? I guess you could say that... I'm going through different stages of the times... I go through many stages all at once practically... then I'm usually over it. It depends... Writing does help though! Thanks for your reply. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What a great write Jen! I was so impressed. You have a true talent as a writer. I hope that you are able to get through your situation. Best of luck! Love Always ~*~Star~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i wanna bump this up cause i think it's something other members should read. so... ~*bump*~  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great, thanks for sharing. You are writing good lately.......forget about the blocks. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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