Teen Poetry #3 |
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it will wait |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
how can i smile and be "me" when all i am is gone so far away i cannot touch no where to be seen i hear his voice on the phone talk each and every night trying to hold together and not let hurt be known i feel so trapped and helpless when he visits my memories but no ammount of crying or screaming can help this hours seem like days and days feel like years i long to feel his touch (again) his tender kiss is what i crave the only thoughts in my mind are dreams of weeks to come when we'll be in an embrace and the whole wide world will find that love will always wait forever if it must it will survive time, joy and pain if it is written in fate. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i believe in what you say here. because my true love was killed about three years ago. and by life has never been the same i can't get to close to people. but i know when i die i'll be happy forever with her. also great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful and sad.....take care. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i feel you...my first love played me for a fool thinking that i just wanted to sleep with him...ha was he wrong...after that never seen him until recently...and its so hard to look at him and think that this is someone that i loved at one point...but i have no feelings or emotions left for him...love isnt a game...but he thought it was...if you want something very badly set it free, if it comes back to you its yours forever if it doesnt it was never yours to begin with...so i hope that you will get back with him... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
First of all, thank you for the replies! I am happy that people have taken this in different ways... especially you, Erin. I'm glad it meant different things to different people. Thank you again for the replies! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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