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Why I hate roses, violets, and love
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Why I hate roses, violets, and love |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You never said you hated me, untill three days ago. You didn't say it then, but you implied it so, I'll tell you why I hate roses, it's all because of you, and can you tell me why violets, are called violets when they're blue. I'll tell you why I hate love, because it's all your fault, and don't ever try again, to make me what im not. I hate roses, and violets, I hate love too. How could I hate those things, when what I hate is you. I hate you so much I love you, and I want you so bad to call. I've backed myself to the edge, and I'm afraid that I might fall. I need to be lifted up by angels, by you and all the rest. And if you can't do that, I need you to try your best. ---------------------------------------------------- LaLalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala  Toooooooo many happy pills for me!!!!Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
somebody please reply! I'll be very pleased!!  bye byeDon't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I, too, hate roses, love, etc. Men suck. They can be so dissapointing. I loved the poem... keep it up. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
first of all its not alwayse guys that make life hell a girl is why i hate love now i think i was hurt just as bad as you i hope you at least get over it best of luck "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write "Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
hey, i never said guys suck alright emptyness?? that's not my opinion. Love is just really messed, alright?? anyways, thanks for replyin' I'm sorry you're hurting, and so am I. Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
He probably meant me... I said that. No biggie... right now men DO suck. Not that women can't do that at times... I know we can. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hi love the poem its great but, i dont like how its always men i am the sweetest guy what about the ones like me? Well hey not all men suck just the ingorant ones but hey the ones on here got some kinda love all the "bad" guys which girls love so much would not ever be seen on this site so hey i can tell you me and most of the other guys here are the sweetest u can imagine "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Your poem is so so so great, but I'm sorry to see that you're sad, and hurt. Well, not all guys are like this one, you've got to look for a guy that look into your eyes, and sees the wonderful woman that's inside of you. Great poem Allysa, and follow your hearth, and on behalf of every guy, forgive us for all the harm he's done. Bye, and thanks It's been raining since you left me. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
my theory on men- "Cant live with em, can't live without them-hate to love them, love to hate them!!" good work i loved it! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is a really good poem Allysa. If he's the one, he'll be there. I don't like the comment made by Jenn...though it's true, as true as girls suck too. EVERYONE can suck, that's why said not to be perfect. Let's just leave the guy bashing to ourselves okay. I can't believe I'm doing this, but it got me a little agitated. I'm usually not like this. Jenn, please, next time let's be more suttle, please, ok? I'm sorry Allysa, i should be talking about your poem. I really like it a lot. keep writing girl 5 outa 5 smiles for ya< !signature-->I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Acire~~~(sorry Allysa) So you are saying girls suck huh???What about me???I thought I was your friend...And Im a girl so that means I suck???Well mister I am gonna hunt you down in Chicago and find you and kick your butt!!!LOL Anyways Allysa hearts were meant to be broken then mended back together...I know that you are going through some difficult things right now...But things will get better...Not all guys suck...Just a few out of the many there are...LOL Anyways good luck with your 2 boys...Keep us posted on whats going on...But I still dont think you should wait around for Justin...Its not worth it...If it wasnt meant to be in the future yous will meet again...I know I wouldnt wait around for a guy anymore...I did it before and its not gonna happen anytime soon...(I was gonna save never but who knows I still got my whole life ahead of me)... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
I agree with ERIN, not all guys suck, I don't suck, I think. And you are waitting for someone? Mmmmmm, I don't think that's a good idea, I've been doing that since January, and now she's with another guy, so, yeah, you shouldn't wait for him. It's been raining since you left me. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Do not give up on love and roses. I promise one day, love and roses will be the best thing you ever had. Your poem was wonderful!! And for someone who seems so heart broken, you sure do have a lot of happiness!! < !signature--> That's good though!keep it up! best of luck in love and life!Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
ok my friends think that I am an expert on the ways of guys because I've been hurt by so many and can't seem to find mr. right and was beginning to think that I never will, but then I realized that I'm not an expert and that not all guys treat girls like dirt and that the only reason why girls think that all guys suck (the word most girls use) is because once they've been burned (so to speak) they think that all guys are jerks, but to tell the truth...for every 5 guys that are jerks there are atleast 10 that will treat a girl with respect. They are just somewhere out there waiting for the girl to show up and when she does that guy will treat the girl so right that she will forget about the previous jerk. I'm not saying that I know everything and if it sounds as though I have somehow sounded as though I have then I apologize wholeheartedly, I am just saying that I have been there and done that and do not want to write the book  Anyway, this was a good poem and it has alot of heart in it...keep up the good work  "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ok.....before I express my opinion, which you all know I love to do....i have to comment on something chic said. "For every 5 guys there are 10 ready to treat a woman good".....she said something like that. I'd like to know how this is possible. Are you saying that if you cut a jerk in half, you get two decent guys? That is an interesting concept. (Note: joke joke joke joke joke). ANYWAYZ....you all seem to side with your sex. Men think women suck and women think men suck.....bla bla bla bla. Now Don't come up to me and say "men/women don't suck, I nEVer said that bla bla bla" cuz frankly, i never said you did. What I am saying is this: Everybody will inevitably get hurt. Some will get hurt more frequently due to their irrational actions or just happen to fall in love too quickly, and some will just hurt to a great extent for various reasons. All in all, we hurt. It's this cosmic balance of THINGS-THAT-COME-ALONG-WITH-CARING deal. You see, i disagree with ALL of you who say LOVE hurts and love sucks and so on. Why? Well because love cannot possible suck or hurt. Love is nothing but the perfect sense of happiness and wonderment. See, the thing that DOES hurt is the contradiction to love. The lack of it or unrequited love. -When you fall in love and the person doesn't love you back. CULPRET= unrequited love. -When your boy/girlfriend hurt you. CULPRET= FEELING AS IF NOT BEING CARED FOR, a Slight sense of lack of love at that instant. (and don't go telling me "oh no you're wrong, cuz i happen to know this for a fact). All in all, love can never suck. Love is great and falling in love is just about the best thing in this world. It's what balances everything from subsequencially collapsing upon itself. Love is the universal sense of greatness. So I say this: How can that ever be bad? How is it logical for this to ever be bad? It cannot, and thus proving that it is the CONTRADICTION of love that pains you all and myself. -FIN-  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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