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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Oh God this can't be true... She walked away, she left us all alone here. She was pulled away from what she knew, now just a memory for us. The sweet soul who lived among us, now an angel to watch over us. But you are left here, by yourself. Your heart is ripped apart, sometimes you can't take it anymore. You sit solitary, wishing for a love like hers to return to you. It's impossible for you to see, that you're so special. You need a solid place to lean on, You can hardly stand on your own two feet. I'm here for you, tell me what I can do for you. I wish you to be happy again... it's been so long since it hasn't pained you to smile. You're unique, and sweet, and eloquent. You're the reason men aren't so terrible. Try and surpass your pain... Please surrvive this... |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a heart felt poem about the strength to move on. great dersciptiveness in your lines. i'm glad you want to be there for your friend too. even though we all hate to admit it, people need things to lean on when they are hurt. that's when we need help the most. great writing; a wonderful free verse. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow this poem was really deep and very good! i hope that your friend is ok and i wish him the best. very good poem Curlz "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully emotional Jenn, beautiful sentiments to strengthen the one you speak of ... very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I can really feel the yearning in this, Jenn. You've managed to capture a broad range of emotions and pen them well. I'm impressed. So much Jenn, so little time.  ~AF~ "No wonder I do not make people comfortable. I am a mirror. I have far too many things to say." - Mouthing the Words |
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