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Teen Poetry #3

Peppermint Tea

Tangomage
New Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-09-25 09:33 PM

This and that,
Whirl and twirl,
Strawberry flow,
Peppermint swirl.

Peppermint Tea,
And burning flack,
Leads me to places
I don't go back.

Navy blue,
Q E 2,
All the same,
when you play the game.

Websites,
Flying Kites,
Lollipops,
And British Cops.

In the end,
We all go there,
To the place we know,
and know we care.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-09-26 03:46 PM

I really like the flow of this, but I think I might be missing something from the meaning. Anyway, keep the poems coming

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2000-09-26 04:00 PM

you use you words like a wondrous verbal paintbrush. the imagery here is great. i particularly like the last two stanzas.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

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