Teen Poetry #3 |
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I Thought You Knew [part II] |
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~*Meghan*~ Junior Member
since 2000-05-22
Posts 17 |
Let the water crash upon me Let the fire be burn before me Let the wind blow around me And I will not fall Let your words be thrown like spears Let your actions bring my tears Let your petty little choices bring my fears And I will not fall My love goes deeper than the ocean's depths I held you tighter than Gods' holy hand I loved you harder, than anyone you've met ~I thought you knew all this before hand, and now you've hurt me. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very good, I liked it. Thanks for sharing it ![]() |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Do I know how you feel or what?!?! My goodness, I've felt exactly this way before. You just have to know that no guy is worth your tears, and the one who is won't make you cry. So pick your heart up off the floor and do better! You may have gotten hurt, just use it as a learning experience. Keep your chin up girl! It's like I always say"Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade..."Best of luck in life and love girl! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey! I hope things are ok with you! Anyway i thought the format of this poem was stylin' i liked it a lot. Shhhhhh don't tell nobody, but don't you think it's funny when people try to ACT intellectual by talkin all funny? hee hee hee..... anyway the poem was cool! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I know I replied to a poem with part 1 in the title...But I never found part 2 till now...When you get your heart broken its a learning experience to make sure your heart can take it...Dont think of it as anything bad its just seeing if you can go through with it...One day a guy is gonna come along who you are gonna fall in love with...And you are gonna think back to what all of us told you here... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have a way with words...This is a very good poem, keep writing. Sorry to hear about your situation right now. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
I didn't have the honor to read the first part of this poem, but i must say i would like to. The second part is awsome and i can't wait to find the first part. keep up the great work. *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
"i held you tighter than God's holy hand." now there's a sentiment that i can empathize with. i've only let myself feel that way once. keep that chin up. the world, oddly enough, will continue to turn! this reminds me of an old, old post of mine. i think i'll repost it. good luck, and good writing. =) Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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