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Run Away Passions |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Run Away Passions: I walk the surface of unknown cares. I've lost my path amongst the wood. Where are we from anyway, Is something I have never undertsood. I lost the lower left section of my heart To a man who thinks and hopes, That I may die the deaths of deaths To buy his daily dope. One passion gone, two left to be taken. It's something I await for. But all in time one will leave Causing me to hate more. And as I wait for the nothingness to come I brace my body for pain. And in the end I'll die to know I lived my life in vain.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Excellent job! this was one of those poems that makes you think about ur persepctive on dying and your death! "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dopey, that was very good. Muy bien chico, you have lots of talent mi amigo. keep it up okay? Hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
...i can't even tell you in words really how great this was..i'll just sit in silence. "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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