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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
A face behind a mask A face upon a wall A face of feelings I can tell you it's wrong Don't act like this Don't play like this Don't do this Cuz I know you don't mean it I know you're smarter Cuz I know who you are I know how you're thinking I can tell cuz I know You can try to ignore me You can try to play hard You can try to be stupid But I know who you are I know that you're mine I know you'll always be a part of me I know you'll keep that in mind Cuz I know that you're true.. < !signature--> Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
VS~~~Nice display of what you are feeling (and going through???)...This is one that I thought would end differently as I read...But it sounds like it is getting better???Whoever this is about sounds special to you... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but direct to the point. Sometimes our greatest faults is trying to hard to read someone or their actions. Hope you are right about this person. I once tried that, and i denied everything for i cared so much about the person. I ended up just being hurt. Good luck As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but direct to the point. Sometimes our greatest faults is trying too hard to read someone or their actions. Hope you are right about this person. I once tried that, and i denied everything for i cared so much about the person. I ended up just being hurt. Good luck As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
heyaz!! Wel, this person IS very special to me...and I think I know him, I know I know him and I know that this is just a period of stupidity or something... So I'm gonna talk to him and ask him what he's upto... see if it works out.. thnx for the replies!! luvz, VS! Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
~VS~ love this poem/ hope everything works out with the guys. Does anyone know why teachers are nuts? because they decided to occupy us for forever. today we have a field trip, thrusday is picture day, blah blah blah. well, bye. love ya VS, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Great read. Love your work more and more. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great poem!! I'm impressed...very...speechless. Keep it up Hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, great poem VS, this guy must be very special to you. Hey, keep me updated about everything, ok, great poem, bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This poem is really pretty. But do we really know these guys? I know we think we do... but sometimes I'm just not sure. Sometimes things can get surprising... Good luck! Jenn |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As always, a great write...you're very talented. I got your e-mail BTW and I will get back to you asap...I'm just alittle busy these days. Keep your head up girl! Love Always ~*~Star~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe, thanx all of U!! Allysa: well it did!!! and I know, teachers are nuts!!! but...school sux anywayzz, so... luv ya2!! TAP2: Glad you like it!! Isabel Galaxia: Thank you!!!! Caz: he is!! he's the one I told you about! love always! Jenn: Sometimes we don't, but with this guy I know for sure that I know him! StarPryncess17: aaw...thank you  and it's ok, I'll be waitin!!Luvz, to all of you!! VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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