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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
At night when I am scared She was the only one that cared She'd put her arms around me So I couldn't see the darkness that lied within me She always listens to what I have to say And I know that she is here to stay When things get rough She teaches me how to be tough Sometimes when I just want to die She'll show me my wings and teach me how to fly She leads me through my life Just so I won't end it with a knife I'm glad God sent her down I know he doesn't like to see me frown This poem, I really don't know how to end Cause I love her so much and she is a really good friend *dedicated to my best friend, Jessica, thanks for sticking with me* ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a magnificent and heartfelt dedication. sometimes when we face those demons inside, the scariest part is admitting we might need a little help. you are lucky to have each other. very well penned thoughts, as well. thanks for postin' this. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Wooow, great poem, excellent poem. You're very lucky to have a friend like her, I wish I had a friend like that. This poem really touched my soul, and I think it's great to have a friend like that with you. Well, thanks, and bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~~~You sure are lucky to have a friend like her...My best friend was just like her until recently...I dont know what is going on with my friend...But oh well is the way I see it...If she doesnt want to be friends with me then she can go find herself a new best friend...Keep up the good work... p.s.~~~Did you give this to her??? *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
what a wondeful thing to say a bout your friend. She must be really special. Hope you have given this poem to her. I love this poem...keep writing As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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