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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-06-24 04:41 PM

I hate you with a passion
I love the way you talk
But I hate the words you say
I tremble with everyword
Not knowing what to do
One part of me wants you
The other, just plain hates you
Can't you see I'm confused?
I want you, but I don't
My mind is tyed in knots
Trying to get things straight
I hate the way you look at me
but I just love your eyes
Everytyme I look in your eyes
I tremble with confusion
My heart says one thing
While my body says another
I hate you with a passion.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-25 01:31 AM

well well well you do hate with a passion. Just joking. like the style first line and last line the same states the point and reminds the person great piece.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-06-25 05:14 AM

Great poem, Tamma!
You express the emotion brilliantly.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

3 posted 2000-06-26 09:11 PM

just *bumping* this one up again

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

LIL.MAMA
Junior Member

since 2000-06-26

Posts 32

4 posted 2000-06-26 10:49 PM

WOW YOU ARE A GREAT POET I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE YOU AS AN ONLINE BUDDY BECASE I LOVE TO WRITE POERTY AND MAYBE YOU COULD HELP ME JUST EMAIL ME @ [email protected] KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-03-04 12:03 PM

This might be an oldie, but this is one of the best poems of yours that i've read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-17 02:13 AM

beautiful poem, Tamma. The best I've ever read from you. Very nice job.

--Marie

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