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Teen Poetry #3

Music of Heaven

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-09-24 08:42 PM

The sound of everything that passes me by,
Makes music like an orchestra from heaven.
I can here the tune even now....
I here the same tune all the time,
Yet it never gets boring.
I want to play the music,
But I can't find out how.
The music of heaven,
It will be the last I ever hear.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-09-24 11:31 PM

an intriguing piece of poetry, no doubt. left very open ended.
"the sound of everything that passes me by"
so much is implied, yet much remains unsaid.
a unique and beautiful piece.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

2 posted 2000-09-25 08:25 PM

Good poem! excellent form of writing! hope you won't do drastic things to hear the music hehe just kidding

Hope to read more soon!
Curlz

"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-09-25 09:56 PM

you are very talented...you have real good writing skills. keep it up. i'd love to read more of your work

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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