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My Pain |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Well out of the 3 I posted up today 2 were short and 1 was longer than usual. So like, read the long one too cuz whats the point in reading just the tiny little 4 liners all the time? My pain: My eyes are closed wanting to see the world. My ears bleed wanting to hear the world. I'm living in contradiction to life. A slow death.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
We all lives our lives in slow motion to death Dopey...At least in my opinion...We are only born to die...Well there is my opinion...Good work though!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
this made me think of a quote: "life is a sexually transmitted disease that is always fatal." i think my fav line is "I'm living in contradiction to life" beautifully penned and most intriguing... much is implied; much remains unsaid. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. You know I have to be honest... you write very well. Kudos man. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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