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Teen Poetry #3

What we used to be

FitchGirl1896
New Member

since 2000-09-15

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-09-22 07:48 PM

W used to be so perfect
But now it’s said and done
We are finally over
Now this pain has just begun
You always talk about her
Thinking I won’t care
The thing you’ll never realizes it that
Its more heart ache than I can bear
When we talk
Tears cloud up my eyes
How can I still love you?
Through all the hate & despise?
I am trying to be your friend
The kind you want to count on
Until the very end
But you are with her know
And I know that for sure
But I want you to know
I will always love you more

~*To anyone who cant get their ex out of their head*~

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2000-09-22 08:37 PM

This poem is really good!! I know it's hard for me to get my ex out of my head especially since i see him at school everyday with his new girlfriend. But now i think "i can't believe i went out with him"

This poem is awesome!! Your such a good writer

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Love,
Valerie a.k.a ~sugarpie313~

~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-23 06:56 PM

Girl their have been times where my boyfriend has brought up his ex into our conversations...And its like hello I dont want to hear about her...But anyways you showed how you felt and it was a good way to express yourself...Keep up the good work...Just dont let him get to you...

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-09-24 12:55 PM

This poem was directed to me if it was for those who can't get their X out of their head. HOly crap........ i don't think you people could even imagine the HELL i am going through. You know.....it's like....no no....no opening up.
Anyway.... the poem was cool. I ralte immensely....bye

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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