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Teen Poetry #3

no more (please tell me what you think)

FitchGirl1896
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since 2000-09-15

Posts 9

0 posted 2000-09-22 05:28 PM

No more tears
No more lies
  No more pain
   No more danies
  No more nights when I'm all alone
No more times where I sit by the phone
No more pain
No more strife
  Now I can get on with my life
   No more games
  Becuase they've all been played
No more sadness
I got it made!
No more of this
  Because your done and through
Im so happy!
    THERE'S NO MORE YOU!

~*This is to my ex boyfriend who thought he could get me back*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-22 05:31 PM

Fitch~~~I thought this was good...A good way to let this person know what you are feeling...You just opened up and said how it goes...Good for you!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-22 07:37 PM

I liked this one. Showed a lot of emotion.
Good job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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