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mr0001
Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39


0 posted 2000-06-12 02:28 AM





sanity is highly overrated!
it is much more fun to do
what you want when you want,
and say what is on your mind.
some call that insane and if so,
please lock me up and
throw away the key, never do
i want to return to that
world where you have to do
what is expected without even
thinking if it's what YOU want
and where you have to say what
people want to hear w/o thinking
if it's what you want to say.
who is sane, who is crazy?
which world makes more sense to you?


--
"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.
--
some people draw the outlines in life,
i chose to add the color!
--

[This message has been edited by mr0001 (edited 06-12-2000).]

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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-12 03:12 PM


Do what you want...say what you wish to say..live the way you want to live...I guess these things are not crazy or insane..

Sincerely
A_L

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-06-13 06:52 PM


This poem is comforting in a way.
you have a great outlook on life
and this poem helps the reader feel the same way and it lets them know its ok to be a bit "crazy" and do what YOU want to!
your work is highly enjoyable
keep it up!  

Novacaine For The Soul
Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122
New Orleans
3 posted 2000-06-14 12:31 PM


dear mister,
     not quite as good (in my opinion) as your dialogue poem (can't recall the title), but certainly nothing to scoff at... you have quite a talent... with some carefull honing of your skills you could be an incredible poet... as for the whole insanity thing... consider this... sanity is only the thoughts of the majority... thus, if the INsane were suddenly to rise to the majority, the sane would become the INsane...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

 you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...

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