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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Sweet Words I know why your here, I can see it in your eyes, as you whisper sweet words, that are just a bunch of lies. You think I dont know it, you think I cant see through you, but you still whisper your sweet words, as if you are being true. What kind of game, are you trying to play with my head?, Thinking that whispering your sweet words, is an easy way to get me into bed. I just want you to know, take your words to someone that cares, cause a bunch of sweet words to me, arent gonna get you anywhere. *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Wow, hey I'm first two times in a row. Check me out, aren't I cool. Good meaning behind this poem. Its so easy to fall for someone's sweet talk. jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jason~~~Just think you are so special!!!You are 1st to reply to both of my poems!!!Yeah!!!Thanks for your reply...It sure is easy to fall for sweet talk... P.S.~~~I love your quote!!!!!! < !signature--> *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow, sweet talk, have I not had my fair share? Men suck sometimes.... I am usually the dumb one... I can sometimes fall for it. The worst is when they won't admit it when they're caught. Damn men! Okay, they're not all scum... just 75% of the ones I've encountered. Love the poem! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~~~Thanks for the reply!!!I have to agree with you on the 75%...Almost all of the guys I know think that the sweetest word can get a girl to fall for them...They even try to pull it on me!!!Thats the funny thing about it...They know I know how they are but yet the still manange to try... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Wow!! that was such a good poem! I know what you mean about saying a bunch of bull just trying to get somewhere, and the bad thing is with my last boyfriend, the idiot, well i feel for it. Sometimes i think that if it wouldn't have ended he would have tried to get me to sleep with him! Lindsay "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe,Erin I really liked this one. It is soo true  LOVE ELMO!  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you's both for the replies... *smiles* to you to Elmo!!!  *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eya!!! how are ya girl?? well, I'm kinda back at the mo! hehe, need to write some poems!!!!*you know why, I guess....* but I just luvd your poem!! it's SO true... unfortunately.... luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Been that person way to many times ( the one doing the sweet talking). It is so selfish, I now realize, a little older, wiser. I'm glad you can see through it. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks much VS and Thomas for your replies... Thomas~~~Im glad your done with all that sweet talking now...At least you should be!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
I got some sweet words for you. That was sooo good. I really felt it. Stay Tru |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I love this!!!! True, there are lots of guys that will whisper sweet nothings in your ear to get what they want. I'm so glad that you see through them!!! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Erin, this is a great poem. Who tried to get you to fall for him? did you just break up with your boyriend? |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
~*~Erin~*~ < !signature-->What am I to say? I think we've all fallen for the sweet talk and in our times of sorrow felt so ignorant and naive for it. There's not much else to do than move on and say "oh well" I mean, it just isn't worth the ache. ya know? Anyways, this poem was much enjoyed and very well worded. I have always admired your talent; but hey you already knew that. Until we meet again my dear, take care... Love Always ~*~Jello~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
straight to the point. Maybe your simplest poem that I've read, but none the less still greatly written. Great write As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you all for the replies!!!I am very flattered that so many people liked this one...You guys are so great!!! Jose~~~No we didnt break up...Why do you ask??? *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
It just seems like something that you would send to an ex who is trying to get back together with you. Maybe I was wrong |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jose~~~I understand what you are saying...I dont know where this poem came from though... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Good job i really like this poem... I should take after it...!! Hehe Sweet words can usully get me anywhere  ... Hope to see more..!!Luv, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Cutie~~~LOL thats a good one...Hey why not do it if you could get away with it right?!?! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Words expressed in the most beautiful way a women or girl expressing what she feels and to know that a guy is just trying to get u into bed theres nothing better then a letter of rejection or a poem in this case. plz check out my poem its entitled "FLY" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks for the reply...I will check out your poem!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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