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Love Is Nothing But a Broken Heart
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Love Is Nothing But a Broken Heart |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
Love Is Nothing But a Broken Heart With each and every passing day, with every lonely step I take With every moment lost in dreams, I know loving you was my mistake I opened up my eyes to you, and then I opened up my heart I even opened up my soul to you, and let you in the deepest part I shared with you my feelings, my hopes and dreams and fears For you I fought with all my might, for you I shed those bitter tears I took every painful blow, I swallowed every bit of pride I gave you everything I could, until there was nothing left inside For you I risked it all, I put my heart and soul at stake I made endless promises to you that forever would not break Even when my heart ached deeply on those long and sleepless nights I'd still wipe away the tears and thank God you were in my life There's something deep inside you that I could never find in someone else And that's what makes me love you even more than life itself But the more I seem to love you, the more I seem to hurt And with every passing moment, the loneliness gets worse My common sense got left behind, but the truth's not hard to hide Love is nothing but a broken heart that's killing me inside. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Heartfelt and beautiful writing...sometimes there's a beauty in sadness. Jon |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have a very nice rhythm and flow to this FemaleSenzasian ... it sounds as though you've come to a crossroads, and are gauging which direction to turn next. All I can offer to you, is to follow what you know is best for "you", for your life, your happiness, and your well-being.  Best wishes and take care, /Kit |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Very beautiful poem....but keep your head up...not all love ends that way. In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh, I can kind of relate to this. You'll pull through, eventually. Good writing. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hmm...I know how you feel, but do not lose faith in love or it shall lose faith in you too...For it is a wonderful thing and every person's true love will come in time. Keep your head up I know it's hard...but It'll get easier I promise. "Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade..." (J.L.H) < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you have such a gift in writing...i really love your poems cause you have a way with words. you make each word read in your poems very heartfelt....i applaud you... im so sorry for what you're going thru right now... ps. u asian? what type? pls dont mind me asking cause im half asian too As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Lousy hearts! Yeah, I agree, love is nothing but pain…still, I wouldn’t trade it for all the happiness in the world if it meant I would have to live alone… Redefining work, my dear, I hope you find a love that can float through you, and not reduce you to tears… In-wishing-hearts-came-with-a-mail-in-rebate THERE IS NO SPOON! Spreading insanity, one post at a time Singing, "If i die before i wake..." |
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