Teen Poetry #3 |
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As Time Goes On R/R Please :) |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA ![]() |
Every tear cried, Is a lesson learned. Every heart-break, Is wisdom earned. Love tends to cause, Endless strife and pain. But if you are strong, Then you will only gain. Accept that hurt, That is dealt to you. And soon your dark skies, Will once again be blue. As time goes on, A heart does heal. But the scars that remain, You will always feel. Keep your head held high, Be proud and strong. And soon you true love, Will come along. You’ll look back at loves past, And laugh as you say, “What was I thinking, on all those days?” |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
you know i love this! keep it up girl! luv ya! ~*Pixie*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I loved it!!! You are truly talented! And you're right...the pain does subside, it's like I always say.."Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade..." Keep it up I was impressed! < !signature-->![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
hey Sara! This is an awesome POEM!!! make sure you write one for me!!! HAHAHA ![]() see ya 'round... buh bye Love, Val a.k.a ~*Space Cadet*~ lol ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Way to look on the bright side. Sometimes we forget to do that! Great poem. ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know, i liked this poem. I feel its cool to view at it positively....but see..... its like this sugar...... i am going through this right now....and the pain will subside in about a year..... now i know i'll look back on and think "damn i was a wreck"...but not that i was foolish in thinkin the thigns i do. Crap i have a huge headache... i dont know what im saying.....all i know is that it all depends on what it is you are going or went through. but yea, liked the poem ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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