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Teen Poetry #3

Thinking

UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

0 posted 2000-09-17 11:12 PM

All of the things in my head
Are they really there
Or do I not think about them as
I lay in my bed but how will I know I'm not thinking about if I don't think about them
but if I think about them it would be
near impossible not to think about them if I don't
want to think about them so I will just leave
It alone but if I leave it alone will it go away
or will it stay and sit and come up everytime I
think about it I don't know We will just wait and see.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-17 11:17 PM

UNC~~~Nice work!!!Its good to think sometimes though...At least I think it is...I often think about things that might make my world screwed up...Dont ask me why...For some reason things make me think the worst...But I have no clue again on that one...

Anyways sorry about going on and on...

Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-09-18 06:50 AM

I liked it! keep it up!

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2000-09-18 03:51 PM

love the poem. can't talk much. to sad. bye.

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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