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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-06-23 12:46 PM


~Chapter 3~

You are such a sweet guy,
and you have such a comforting voice.
Now I know,
you should have been my 1st choice.

You hold me in your arms,
as you tell me you care.
I really do believe,
that you will always be there.

For the past couple months,
our relationship has grown strong.
This is one love,
I think will never go wrong.


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
MysticalAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23

1 posted 2000-06-23 12:54 PM


I am glad that you are one person that is blessed with a good relationship with someone. Just curious though...Why do you call it Chapter 3? Is there any specific reason behind it? Good poem. Thanks... MysticalAngel
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-23 01:52 AM


ok ok i know replie now and stop playing games. ok i loved them all i find a meaning in them from you. i story from your life about guys from before till now great idea. and great work. keep the idea alive.
                 JJ

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-06-23 03:25 AM


well MYSTICALANGEL this is the 3rd chapter of the relationships i have had with someone and this is the person that i truely care about. the 1st and 2nd chapter were guys that just wanted to see how far they can get me. to see if they can get me in bed with them. JEREMIAH i want to say thank you to you. you always have a reply no matter what kind of poem it is. you always make me smile with your responses. you show that you are someone that really cares about other peoples work and i appreciate your comments.

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-23 04:34 AM


*sigh* the third and final chapter with a happy ending!   Glad things are working out for you! Best of luck with your love and keep up the wonderful writing ok? Because if for some odd reason, this guy keeps you from writing and me from having the joy of reading it...then there'll  be some controversey and i'm going to be forced to become upset. j/k!   Glad you had a fairytale ending! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~< !signature-->

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~


[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 06-23-2000).]

Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

5 posted 2000-06-23 08:22 AM


Ok, I really like this poem. *sigh* it makes me so happy to hear a happy ending. I am soo glad everything worked out. Keep your chin up nad take care girl.


Crystal

P.S. Just goes to show that maybe there's some truth to my signature after all  

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-11-18 01:54 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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